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Revision as of 03:10, September 18, 2012 by Ooswesthoesbes (Talk | contribs)

I think you can use some constructive criticism :) Assuming you mean "neighborhood" with districts, perhaps you could cut down a bit on the number of districts? Settlements of comparable size, such as East Hills, tend to only have one neighborhood. Also, I'm slightly concerned about the lay-out of your map. There might be some problems converting it to wikicode. For the rest, keep working on it; the base looks great. I especially like the Jewish reference, 'cause Jews are currently slightly underrepresented in Lovia :) --OuWTBsjrief-mich 14:04, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know how large one neighbourhood should be, but for example in the most-recently added neighbourhood (Granita Lakes) there will be only 300 people. Tramien (talk) 20:54, September 16, 2012 (UTC)
And about the Jewish population. To the right-bottom of the City Hall, there is an unnamed red square, which will be a synagogue. --Tramien (talk) 21:02, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks great, but the name is a tad unrealistic. Perhaps simply "Dusk"? TimeMaster (talkcontribs) 00:11, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe... The name isn't unrealistic, because, for example, in Russia some activities of winter olympics will occur in a village, which name translated to English would mean "Red meadow".
Agreed, but the addition of "town" reduces the realism. In addition, that sort of thing is much less common in English. TimeMaster (talkcontribs) 01:41, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
Anyway: it should be Sunrise Town (with capital T). --OuWTBsjrief-mich 03:10, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

"Dusk" sounds good to me, but in the Etymology section you can see why did I choose this name for the city. There are 2 reasons, because no one is sure of how older cities got their names. And it is a thing that I wanted this town to be similar to others.
Although until the page will be finished, we can change the name of this place. --Tramien (talk) 12:23, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

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