I think you can use some constructive criticism :) Assuming you mean "neighborhood" with districts, perhaps you could cut down a bit on the number of districts? Settlements of comparable size, such as East Hills, tend to only have one neighborhood. Also, I'm slightly concerned about the lay-out of your map. There might be some problems converting it to wikicode. For the rest, keep working on it; the base looks great. I especially like the Jewish reference, 'cause Jews are currently slightly underrepresented in Lovia :) --OuWTBsjrief-mich 14:04, September 16, 2012 (UTC)
- I don't know how large one neighbourhood should be, but for example in the most-recently added neighbourhood (Granita Lakes) there will be only 300 people. Tramien (talk) 20:54, September 16, 2012 (UTC)
- And about the Jewish population. To the right-bottom of the City Hall, there is an unnamed red square, which will be a synagogue. --Tramien (talk) 21:02, September 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Maybe... The name isn't unrealistic, because, for example, in Russia some activities of winter olympics will occur in a village, which name translated to English would mean "Red meadow".
"Dusk" sounds good to me, but in the Etymology section you can see why did I choose this name for the city. There are 2 reasons, because no one is sure of how older cities got their names. And it is a thing that I wanted this town to be similar to others.
Although until the page will be finished, we can change the name of this place. --Tramien (talk) 12:23, September 17, 2012 (UTC)