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I think it looks great, but the name is a tad unrealistic. Perhaps simply "Dusk"? <small>—[[User:TimeMaster|TimeMaster]] ([[User talk:TimeMaster|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/TimeMaster|contribs]])</small> 00:11, September 17, 2012 (UTC)
 
I think it looks great, but the name is a tad unrealistic. Perhaps simply "Dusk"? <small>—[[User:TimeMaster|TimeMaster]] ([[User talk:TimeMaster|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/TimeMaster|contribs]])</small> 00:11, September 17, 2012 (UTC)
   
: Maybe... The name isn't unrealistic, because, for example, in Russia some activities of winter olympics will occur in a village, which name translated to English would mean "Red meadow". <br/>
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: Maybe... The name isn't unrealistic, because, for example, in Russia some activities of winter olympics will occur in a village, which name translated to English would mean "Red meadow".
::Agreed, but the addition of "town" reduces the realism. In addition, that sort of thing is much less common in English. <small>—[[User:TimeMaster|TimeMaster]] ([[User talk:TimeMaster|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/TimeMaster|contribs]])</small> 01:41, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
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: ::Agreed, but the addition of "town" reduces the realism. In addition, that sort of thing is much less common in English. <small>—[[User:TimeMaster|TimeMaster]] ([[User talk:TimeMaster|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/TimeMaster|contribs]])</small> 01:41, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
 
:::Anyway: it should be Sunrise Town (with capital T). --[[User:Ooswesthoesbes|O<u>u</u>WTB]][[User talk:Ooswesthoesbes|<sup>sjrief-mich</sup>]] 03:10, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
 
:::Anyway: it should be Sunrise Town (with capital T). --[[User:Ooswesthoesbes|O<u>u</u>WTB]][[User talk:Ooswesthoesbes|<sup>sjrief-mich</sup>]] 03:10, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
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:::::@TimeMaster: We can remove "town" part.
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:::::@Ooswesthoesbes: I'm not English, and I learn this language only 4 years. I didn't know that. Mistakes are humane :D --[[User:Tramien|Tramien]] ([[User talk:Tramien|talk]]) 12:45, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
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::::::No problem; we're here to help you :) --[[User:Ooswesthoesbes|O<u>u</u>WTB]][[User talk:Ooswesthoesbes|<sup>sjrief-mich</sup>]] 16:48, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
   
"Dusk" sounds good to me, but in the Etymology section you can see why did I choose this name for the city. There are 2 reasons, because no one is sure of how older cities got their names. And it is a thing that I wanted this town to be similar to others. <br/>
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"Dusk" sounds good to me, but in the Etymology section you can see why did I choose this name for the city. There are 2 reasons, because no one is sure of how older cities got their names. And it is a thing that I wanted this town to be similar to others.<br />
 
Although until the page will be finished, we can change the name of this place. --[[User:Tramien|Tramien]] ([[User talk:Tramien|talk]]) 12:23, September 17, 2012 (UTC)
 
Although until the page will be finished, we can change the name of this place. --[[User:Tramien|Tramien]] ([[User talk:Tramien|talk]]) 12:23, September 17, 2012 (UTC)
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I think the town needs some famous people... Could someone help me out with that?? --[[User:Tramien|Tramien]] ([[User talk:Tramien|talk]]) 12:45, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
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*[[Cools Robinson]] (jazz musician, songwriter and singer) - born in [[Noble City]]
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*[[Dieter Most]] (soccer player) - born in Sunrise Town
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The list is incomplete. [[User:Wabba The I|Wabba The I]] ([[User talk:Wabba The I|talk]]) 17:14, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
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== I'm back! ==
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Hey,<br />
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I'm back. I couldn't contribute this page, because my pc was broken (I notified that for you to know, that I didn't leave this wiki ;) ). Wish to contribute soon, when I'll have more time to do it.<br />
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Lots of love :D<br />
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Tramien<br />
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19:52 2012 October, 20 (UTC)
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: You know considering you put lots of love I don't know quite how to respond but WELCOME BACK! :L [[Lukas Hoffmann|Hoffmann]] [[File:LogoCNP.png|20px|link=Conservative Nationalist Party]] <small>[[User:Kunarian|Kunarian]]</small>'''[[User talk:Kunarian|TALK]]''' 18:54, October 20, 2012 (UTC)
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::: Ummm... haha. I tried to write that as a short letter. --[[User:Tramien|Tramien]] ([[User talk:Tramien|talk]]) 14:58, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

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I think you can use some constructive criticism :) Assuming you mean "neighborhood" with districts, perhaps you could cut down a bit on the number of districts? Settlements of comparable size, such as East Hills, tend to only have one neighborhood. Also, I'm slightly concerned about the lay-out of your map. There might be some problems converting it to wikicode. For the rest, keep working on it; the base looks great. I especially like the Jewish reference, 'cause Jews are currently slightly underrepresented in Lovia :) --OuWTBsjrief-mich 14:04, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know how large one neighbourhood should be, but for example in the most-recently added neighbourhood (Granita Lakes) there will be only 300 people. Tramien (talk) 20:54, September 16, 2012 (UTC)
And about the Jewish population. To the right-bottom of the City Hall, there is an unnamed red square, which will be a synagogue. --Tramien (talk) 21:02, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks great, but the name is a tad unrealistic. Perhaps simply "Dusk"? TimeMaster (talkcontribs) 00:11, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe... The name isn't unrealistic, because, for example, in Russia some activities of winter olympics will occur in a village, which name translated to English would mean "Red meadow".
 ::Agreed, but the addition of "town" reduces the realism. In addition, that sort of thing is much less common in English. TimeMaster (talkcontribs) 01:41, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
Anyway: it should be Sunrise Town (with capital T). --OuWTBsjrief-mich 03:10, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
@TimeMaster: We can remove "town" part.
@Ooswesthoesbes: I'm not English, and I learn this language only 4 years. I didn't know that. Mistakes are humane :D --Tramien (talk) 12:45, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
No problem; we're here to help you :) --OuWTBsjrief-mich 16:48, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

"Dusk" sounds good to me, but in the Etymology section you can see why did I choose this name for the city. There are 2 reasons, because no one is sure of how older cities got their names. And it is a thing that I wanted this town to be similar to others.
Although until the page will be finished, we can change the name of this place. --Tramien (talk) 12:23, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think the town needs some famous people... Could someone help me out with that?? --Tramien (talk) 12:45, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

The list is incomplete. Wabba The I (talk) 17:14, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

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Hey,
I'm back. I couldn't contribute this page, because my pc was broken (I notified that for you to know, that I didn't leave this wiki ;) ). Wish to contribute soon, when I'll have more time to do it.
Lots of love :D
Tramien
19:52 2012 October, 20 (UTC)

You know considering you put lots of love I don't know quite how to respond but WELCOME BACK! :L Hoffmann LogoCNP KunarianTALK 18:54, October 20, 2012 (UTC)
Ummm... haha. I tried to write that as a short letter. --Tramien (talk) 14:58, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

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