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The First Chamber forum is only opened to Members of the Congress. Here MOTC can propose law proposals and other federal issues. They can be discussed and adjusted, until there are replaced to the Second Chamber for vote.

Older proposals

See also: National Archives/Chambers/1 One for the the first proposals.

See also: National Archives/Chambers/2 Two for the second series of proposals.

See also: National Archives/Chambers/3 Three for the third series of proposals.

See also: National Archives/Chambers/4 Four for the fourth series of proposals.

See also: National Archives/Chambers/5 Five for the fifth series of proposals.

See also: National Archives/Chambers/6 Six for the sixth series of proposals.

Postal service

Because of above i also want to propose the following: Article ?:

1. The Lovian Postal service is a organization sorting mails, regulating the postal code system, and the post seals (this is a direct translation of postzegel)
2. The lovian postal service uses this postal code system:

• 1:Sylvania:
  • 1000: Noble city (Downtown)
  • 1010:South Noble City
  • 1020:North Noble City
  • 1030: West Noble City
  • 1040:East Noble City
  • 1050:Train Village
  • 1051:Clave Rock
  • 1060:Nicholasville
• 2:Oceana
  • 2000:Hurbanova (downtown)
  • 2001: East Hills
  • 2010: Millstreet
  • 2020:Drake Town
• 3:Kings
  • 3000:Newhaven downtown
  • 3010 Abby Springs
  • 3020: Under abby:Excludng Malipa
  • 3030:Malipa
• 4:Clymene
  • 4000:Sofasi downtown:
  • 4001:Adoha
  • 4010:Hightech Valley
• 5:Seven
  • 5000:Kinley

With addition of one letter. In case a postal district contains one neighborhood, this letter is assigned to a street. In case a postal district contains more neighborhoods, the letter represents a neighborhood

1. Post seals from the Lovian Postal service contain a stylized portrait of the incumbent monarch
   1. In case there is no monarch, a image of the flag is used
2. The postal service is administered by the Department of Industry, Agriculture and Trade
3. There is a postal council, whihc contains all mayors.
4. Post has to contain a post seal to be free
5. post is sorted automatically

Talk

Any comments? Pierlot McCrooke 08:11, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, look at the previous topic. Dimitri 10:22, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I already saw that. That is why i am proposing this Pierlot McCrooke 10:40, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

@ Pierlot McCrooke, it looks as if you were inspired by the Belgian postal code system. Suppose in this virtual world, the largest city becomes a small hamlet (earthquake, innondation, migration of citizens), the system would prove not to be workable anymore. In my opinion, we should stick to the hexacode. Naranja! --Lars Washington 10:43, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I feel the hexacode is too easy too use for criminals. I also have to say: the hexacodes are illegal used. Why? There was never a vote on them in congress, they where just voered in'(sorry for my bad english) undemocratically. That is what i want to change Pierlot McCrooke 10:47, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Unlegal? Well let's vote for it and make it legal, if that makes you happy, but that does not mean I agree with your concern. --Lars Washington 10:50, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I dont really get you Pierlot McCrooke 10:53, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I im not in favor to change the existing postal code, hexacode, that's all. --Lars Washington 14:45, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think there is anything wrong with the old system anyway. But I can see

Pierlot has done quite some thinking on this matter. Since you, Pierlot, like to "merge towns" so much as you do, why not "merge" the two postal code systems into a combination of both? That's really your thing after all! Dr. Magnus 18:04, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think that is too much. By the way do you support this? THis is similar too TNT post in the netherlands Pierlot McCrooke 19:28, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

What is the opinion of yuri? Pierlot McCrooke 10:28, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lowering the power of the King/PM

This is the first part of a bigger reform plan. This part of the plan is to be treated as one proposal. The goal of this part is to give more power to the Congress and to neutralize the positions of King and PM. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)}

Separation of Powers

Currently the Lovian Constitution states in article 1.A.3. that:

Lovia shall be organized based on the principle of the separation and balance of powers - legislative, executive, and judicial - within the framework of constitutional democracy.

I would like to make this more concrete by adding the following sentence:

Therefore no person is entitled to combine a top function in two or three branches of government; thus, the ruling monarch, the Prime Minister and the Supreme Court Judge shall be no less than three different persons.

Mid-term and Crisis Elections

One of the fields were the King and PM have too much power (compared to Congress, were the real sovereignty lies) are the organization of 'special elections'. The mid-term elections for example can only be organized on initiative of the PM. And there are no regulations at all about what to do when most of Congress is inactive. Therefore I suggest the following:

• Changing Art.8.1.4: Mid-term elections can be organized if proposed in Congress and approved by a Congressial majority. (instead of "by the PM").
• Adding an Art.8.1.5: New federal elections have to be held when more than half of the Members of the Congress are inactive; either self-declared or if they have not edited for over a month (31 days); or when the Prime Minister steps down.

This would also require a description of when the PM has to step down. I will handle that in the following part of this proposal.

Federal Secretaries and Impeachment

To make Congress even stronger against the King and PM, we have to build in an impeachment procedure that allows Congress to fire the entire government:

• Adding an Art.8.2.3.1: When Congress has lost its trust in the incumbent government, it can vote a motion of distrust. When this motion is accepted by a normal majority (50%), both government and Congress are dissolved and new federal elections are to be held.
• Adding an Art.8.2.3.2: When the Prime Minister and his government resign, Congress is dissolved and new federal elections are to be held.

Furthermore, Congress should be able to question Federal Secretaries and other executives of the government. Also, the power of the King and PM in the composition of the government is too big. Therefore I would make these two changes:

• Rewriting Art.8.2.1: The monarch and PM will chose which MOTC will become Secretaries of a certain Department. Their proposal needs to be accepted by a normal majority in Congress.
• Rewriting Art.8.2.2: Congress should be able to question all executing members of government - of any level - about their activities. When they have lost their trust in the questioned person, they can vote a motion of distrust against him/her. When this motion is accepted by a normal majority (50%), he/she has to resign and a replacement has to be proposed by the PM and approved by Congress.

Talk

My support Pierlot McCrooke 10:27, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Can I here and there change your wordchoice and such? Dimitri 10:29, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, and filter out the spelling mistakes and all that. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 10:32, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I will, thanks. Dimitri 10:35, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

You don't mind that I took a good cut in both our respective powers? Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 10:36, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I don't Yuri. In fact, I always wanted this to happen. Democratization after demographic growth. Dimitri 10:38, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Glad we can agree in these matters. That are already three votes, still six to go I guess?! Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 10:41, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Question: Why dissolve Congress if the Gov resigns? Is this really necessary; can't we figure out a more easy way? Elections can take up to two months! Dimitri 10:44, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

They also do that in NL. BUt i dont know a easier way Pierlot McCrooke 10:45, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I know, they do it in most democracies. In fact this is the only 'correct' way to do so. Another option would be for the King to compose a new government with the person who got second most votes in the original elections. This all is however an emergency scenario of which I doubt it will happen. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 10:47, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, fine with me. Has the Dutch Queen already accepted Balkenende's resignation, btw? Dimitri 11:25, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

No Pierlot McCrooke 11:27, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Is she still on ski holiday in Austria? Dimitri 11:27, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I dont know Pierlot McCrooke 11:28, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

The Waldeners hereby give their full support to this proposal cluster.Andy McCandless (WALDEN) 12:59, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

I support it too. --OuWTB^sjrief-mich 18:10, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Vote

See also: Forum:Second Chamber for voting.

Abolishing the undemocratic local regulations

This is the second plan of above mentioned reform plan. This part is also to be treated as a whole and aims at introducing more transparency and democracy in legal regulations. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)}

Because legal regulations made on local levels (states, towns, etc.) are undemocratic, we should abolish them. Only Congress should be able to declare a law. This would imply the following changes to the Constitution:

• Art. 4.2/4.3/4.4 : removing the regulations concerning judicial structures on these levels; leaving only Congress in power to declare a law.
• Deleting Article 5, that regulates the devision of judicial power between national (Congress) and local level(s).
• Art. 6.1: replacing 'Federal or State Law' by just 'Federal Law'.
• Art. 6.3: removing the regulations concerning the creation of a State Law.

Furthermore, I would like to make it possible for anyone to propose a law. Currently, only MOTC can do so. This would require the following changes:

• Art. 6.2.1: One or more Members of the Congress write a motion --> Anyone can write a motion and propose it in Congress (First Chamber)
• Art. 7.3.1: One or more Members of the Congress write an amendment --> Anyone can write an amendment and propose it in Congress (First Chamber)

Also, the judicial institutions on state level should be abolished. There are - luckily - not too many trials in Lovia and Supreme Court can manage them all. Therefor I would like to suggest that we also alter the following:

• Art. 9.1: All judicial cases are to be handled by the Supreme Court (instead of the endless list of what they can do and what is for State Court).
• The deletion of Article 10, which names the fields of authority for the State Courts.

Talk

My support, but a new role for the states has to be found Pierlot McCrooke 10:30, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Indeed, but because that is a more delicate matter it should be addressed afterwards. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 10:31, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

New version (Pierlot)

THis revision above removes some removals by Yuri because otherwise states would be usless

I would like to make it possible for anyone to propose a law. Currently, only MOTC can do so. This would require the following changes:

• Art. 6.2.1: One or more Members of the Congress write a motion --> Anyone can write a motion and propose it in Congress (First Chamber)
• Art. 7.3.1: One or more Members of the Congress write an amendment --> Anyone can write an amendment and propose it in Congress (First Chamber)

Also, the judicial institutions on state level should be abolished. There are - luckily - not too many trials in Lovia and Supreme Court can manage them all. Therefor I would like to suggest that we also alter the following:

• Art. 9.1: All judicial cases are to be handled by the Supreme Court (instead of the endless list of what they can do and what is for State Court).
• The deletion of Article 10, which names the fields of authority for the State Courts.

Pierlot McCrooke 10:49, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

If I have to choose between undemocratic states or useless states, I will pick the latter. Also, in my proposal, states aren't useless but only taken away their judicial powers. They can still enact the regulation. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 14:19, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe making the the second chamber the state chamber should fix the issue. But until this issue is fixed, states have to be undemocratical Pierlot McCrooke 18:31, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Vote

See also: Forum:Second Chamber for voting (of Yuri's proposal).

Changes in the citizenship regulations

This is the final part of the reform plan and is rather small. I believe its intention is clear. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)}

Because the regulations concerning citizenship are rather obscure (inhabitant for four days; 50 usefull edits), I would like to propose the following changes:

3.1. You can become a Lovian citizen if

1. You are active for at least four days

2. You have made at least 50 edits

Only those two conditions have been altered, all other regulations would still stand (like giving name and gender).

Talk

I hope that all these references and changes are clear. It wasn't easy to write. If you should have any questions, just ask me or try to have a look at the Constitution. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 10:34, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

My support Pierlot McCrooke 10:41, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Mine not yet. I had a more concrete proposal in mind. I'll try to write it down as well, okay? Dimitri 11:24, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sure. This is the part of the reform I spent least time on, as the result clearly shows. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 11:30, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I am very pleased with the idea of a faster regulation for citizens. I support the other proposals too. Well done! Harold Freeman 11:40, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

New version (Dimitri)

My more concrete version, including a residence section:

Article 3 – The Lovian citizenship

1. Every inhabitant of Lovia has the right to become a Lovian citizen.
   1. An inhabitant of Lovia is every person who has a domicile (permanent residence) within Lovia.
   2. There are requirements to become a Lovian citizen:
      1. He or she must reside in Lovia.
      2. He or she must have made at least 50 edits.
         1. Acts of vandalism or related edits are not to be included in this count.
      3. He or she must truthfully provide the following personal information:
         1. His or her official name that consists of at least one given name and a surname.
         2. His or her biological sex.
         3. His or her domicile (permanent residence); this being a full adress of a residence in a Lovian city or town.
2. The rights of a citizen are described in Article 2.
3. One's citizenship may be taken away as a punishment in a trial.

What about this version? Dimitri 11:42, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sounds alright to me. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 11:45, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

We (WLP) back it. Andy McCandless (WALDEN) 13:02, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

This is good. --OuWTB^sjrief-mich 18:13, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Again a new version (Pierlot)

Article 3 – The Lovian citizenship

1. Every inhabitant of Lovia has the right to become a Lovian citizen.
   1. An inhabitant of Lovia is every person who has a domicile (permanent residence) on a wiki-style map within Lovia.
   2. There are requirements to become a Lovian citizen:
      1. He or she must reside in Lovia.
      2. He or she must have made at 50 edits.
         1. Acts of vandalism or related edits are not to be included in this count.
      3. He or she must truthfully provide the following personal information:
         1. His or her official name that consists of at least one given name and a surname.
         2. His or her biological sex.
         3. His or her domicile (permanent residence); this being a full adress of a residence in a Lovian city or town.
2. The rights of a citizen are described in Article 2.
3. One's citizenship may be taken away as a punishment in a trial. This needs to be voted upon by Congress, because this may be controversial

Pierlot McCrooke 11:47, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

The issue with the judicial branch is exactly that they solve things the Congress can't do... Dimitri 11:50, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Citizen right take-offs are controversial, so i think this should be voted by Ciongress Pierlot McCrooke 11:53, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Of course they are controversial: but votes can be controversial too! The deal is: a judge judges the case, and his judgement should be considered fair as it is within the Constitutional limits. Dimitri 12:00, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I support the traditional view on this: judges are indeed capable of making a 'correct' decision. If you deserve a block then the loss of citizen can be added too. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 12:02, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Vote

See also: Forum:Second Chamber for voting (Dimitri's revised version).

Amendment bill: Article 1B

I wish to rewrite the Constitutional Article 1B (about the monarchy).

Current state

Article 1 B - Lovia is a monarchy, ruled by a king or queen.

1. The ruling monarch is the person who inherited the throne. This can be the king or the queen.
2. The partner of the ruling monarch is the one who married the person who inherited the throne and
3. A new king or queen:
   1. The monarch of Lovia is the first-born child of the previous ruling monarch.
   2. The person the most related to the former king will become ruling monarch.
      • If the former monarch didn’t have any children.
      • If the first-born child refuses to become king or queen.
4. The heir to the throne has to sign the constitution before his or her inauguration.
5. The king or queen and his or her partner are automatically Members of the Congress.
6. The king and queen have the right to become a federal secretary and/or a member of one or more state governments and/or a member of a city or town government.
7. The ruling monarch receives means by the Department of Finance to compensate his or her expenses. The Secretary of Finance has the right to turn down means if the expenses are not of any general use or if the monarch has spent too much on unnecessary items.
8. The ruling monarch can also:
   • Grant a civilian an extra living as a gift.
   • Grant a company or store the right to be an official Royal Warrant.
9. Every member of the Royal family is equal to normal citizens.

Proposed state

Article 1 B - Lovia is a monarchy, ruled by the ruling monarch.

1. The ruling monarch is the person who legally inherited the throne from the previous ruling monarch. He or she is thus a descendant of the first Lovian monarch, King Arthur I of Lovia (Arthur Noble).
   1. The ruling monarch can be either male (the King) or female (the Queen).
2. The partner of the ruling monarch is the person who legally married the ruling monarch. She is a member of the royal family, but does not enjoy privileges over the citizens of Lovia.
3. The person who legally inherits the Lovian throne, after the previous ruling monarch has either deceased or abdicated, is the person who is most directly related in terms of kinship to the previous ruling monarch.
4. The heir to the throne will sign the Constitution upon his coronation.
5. The ruling monarch is Member of the Congress by Right, meaning he is automatically granted a seat in the Lovian Congress.
   1. The ruling monarch is thus not permitted to participate in elections to Congress.
6. The ruling monarch has the right to demand financial support from the Department of Finances, in which case the Secretary of Finance can decide to grant the ruling monarch an amount of money, in agreement with Congress.
7. With the exception of the ruling monarch in function, no member of the royal family is granted extralegal privileges. Each member of the royal family, with the exception of the ruling monarch in function, is a regular citizen as determined by the Constitution.

Changes

This is what I did:

1. I formalized the article's word use and brought some uniformity to the use of terms as "ruling monarch" and "king or queen".
2. I simplified the paragraph about inheriting the throne.
3. The queen formally was an automatic MOTC as well (!). This I deleted.
4. I deleted the sentence that the king and queen could become secretary and such: that sentence was not needed. As long as there is no sentence saying they cannot do so, they can.
5. I deleted the sentence about the king getting money from the Finance Department. Instead, I added a sentence saying the king could ask for money, and that the Congress would have to agree with what the Finance Secretary decided to do with it.
6. I deleted the king's right to:
   • Give extra residences to some citizens (very undemocratic)
   • Do Royal Warrants (silly system)
7. I reformed the last sentence about the other members of the royal family. Qua content, nothing changes here.

Talk

This is what I earlier promised to do. So here it is . Dimitri 08:42, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

I am pro Pierlot McCrooke 10:42, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Great! Do you think we can start moving the whole load to the 2nd Chamber? Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 11:22, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sure. Group it according to content, and let's start voting. Will you notify all MOTCs? Dimitri 11:27, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Either you can do it now/this evening/tomorrow or I will do it this weekend. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 11:46, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'll perhaps do it tomorrow. In ten minutes' time I'm off to Ghent. Dimitri 13:19, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

I also agree with these changes. --OuWTB^sjrief-mich 18:16, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Vote

See also: Forum:Second Chamber for voting.

Another thing

I can't find it back in the law, but shouldn't someone who commited a crime elsewhere (in another wikination/site) be guaranteed that he won't be punished for that in Lovia? In the past we've seen - mainly other wikinations - doing this and it's not a good way of dealing with things. --OuWTB^sjrief-mich 07:56, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well noticed. We should indeed try to get something of this kind into law. Dimitri 08:53, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Ok. In March - that's tomorrow - the elections in Mäöres end and we'll also try to get it in the law there too. --OuWTB^sjrief-mich 08:56, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Very well. Do feel free to propose the same here in Lovia . If you don't feel like it, I'll look into it myself next week. Dimitri 08:58, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

What about people who committed crimes against humanity or internationally wanted terrorists? Just kidding, good idea! Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 08:59, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Therefore we have outchangingsforbearingstreaties (=uitwisselingsverdragen) ;) --OuWTB^sjrief-mich 09:02, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with OuWTB's idea. Andy McCandless (WALDEN) 13:02, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, got my support too. Harold Freeman 14:29, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Belgium could once arrest, trial and sentence anyone we was accused of crimes against humanity. We had to drop this law though because of pressure from the international community (mainly big nations that made war). Too bad. Perhaps Lovia can become this open too? Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 09:04, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Naa, would get too political. Dimitri 09:05, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Too bad, I liked the idea. But I understand that it is too far removed from the no-nonsense style of the Lovian law. Regaliorum _{(Shō Kitana)} 09:08, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

In my opinion, someone who committed a severe crime on another wikia should have this on his/her (strafregister) for a couple of months, just to remind him/her of his/her wrongdoing elsewhere and because other users should at least be informed. --Lars Washington 09:24, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

2010 Highway Plan (by Secretary McCandless)

Preface

The present situation:

• There is only one highway (Highway 1) in use
• Lovia being an archipelago of small islands, the construction of new highways is rather difficult
• The highways are numbered, starting at one; and so far only Highway 1 is in use

Highway plan

The 2010 Highway Plan consists of these items:

• In the United States, odd numbers generally indicate a north-south route, and even numbers mean an east-west route. We could adopt this system in Lovia as well.
• In that case, the Highway 1 will be divided into smaller portions:
  • The section Hurbanova-Noble City will become the new Highway 2
  • The section Noble City-Train Village will remain Highway 1, and this road will be extended both north and south
  • The section Train Village-Newhaven will become the new Highway 4, and will also be extended west
• A north-south oriented highway across Kings will be constructed, and be named Highway 3
• A north-south oriented highway across Asian Island will be constructed, and be named Highway 5
• In a later phase, a north-south oriented highway from the Emerald Highlands (Clave Rock and East Hills) to Hurbanova would be constructed, and be named Highway 7

Highway overview

The proposed system:

• Highway 1: Blue Sea shore - Train Village - Noble City - southern tip of Sylvania
• Highway 2: Hurbanova - Noble City
• Highway 3: northern tip of Kings - Newhaven
• Highway 4: Clave Rock - Train Village - Connection Bridge - Newhaven
• Highway 5: Adoha - Clymene State Airport - Sofasi
• Highway 7: Clave Rock - East Hills - Hurbanova

Road signs

Construction plan

• Phase 1: Re-organization of Highway 1 (April 2010)
• Phase 2: Construction of primary connections (April 2010 - September 2010)
  • Full construction Highway 3
  • Full construction Highway 5
• Phase 3: Construction of secondary connections (October 2010 - January 2011)
  • Construction Highway 1 between the Blue Sea shore and Train Village
  • Construction Highway 1 between the Noble City and the southern tip of Sylvania
  • Construction Highway 4 between Clave Rock and Train Village
• Phase 4: Construction of the Emeralds-Hurbanova connection (December 2010 - March 2011)
  • Construction Highway 7 between Clave Rock, East Hills and Hurbanova

Talk

In my judgment, a federal secretary can arrange things like these by himself. i do however wish to involve Congress in the process: if democratically agreed on, our plan stands a lot stronger. i would like all members of the congress to think well of the plan i present you here today. It might finally be a solution to a highway "system" that was hard to alter. with this proposal, our nation will be able to construct new highways in the future without having to change the numbering system, or without having irregularities all over. Andy McCandless (WALDEN) 07:35, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Could there as well be a highway to East Hills? From Hurbanova to the north, entlang the ocean and then to the Emeralds where East Hills is located. --OuWTB^sjrief-mich 07:46, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, that would be good :). Is it good if i put it on the construction plan around december 2010? Andy McCandless (WALDEN) 07:50, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with this plan. Pierlot McCrooke 07:56, March 6, 2010 (UTC)